الموضوع: طلاب

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

كيف حالكم طلاب المستوى الثالث - Pre-intermediate - ان شاء الله تكونون بخير دوماً

سوف يقوم بتدريس هذا المستوى الاستاذ القدير كريم سبله

وسوف تكون جميع الدروس التابعه له في هذا الموضوع :101:

الرجاء من جميع الطلاب الدخول على هذا الموضوع \ اضغط http://www.travel4arab.com/vb/showthread.php?t=103386

- طلاب Pre-intermediate مجموعة A -

- السعلوو

- afageeh

- ريلاكس

- عاشقه ماليزيا

- طيف الورود

- *(الريم)*

- Rima

- طلاب Pre-intermediate مجموعة B

- قمر موتوا قهر

- هدهد

- أبو الود

- assaq

- البرنسيسه

- RMQ

- راصد المنتدى

- طلاب Pre-intermediate مجموعة C -

- abu_faisal1

- ولد يوسف

- الدار

- المتأملة

- ميرو

- فانكوفري

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• ما يجري في العالم العربي الآن يسمى
• تكفون ابي احد يأخذ بيدي
• استماع انجليزي
• تحدث اللغه الانجليزيه
• أريد المشاركة معكم
• ابغى مساااااااااااااااااااعده بخصوص ترجمه من الفلبينيه الى العربية
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• الى الأخ ملبورن
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• كلمة شكر اً واعجاب
• طلب اي معهد لتعليم اللغه الفرنسيه بحائل
• ياشباب عندي سوال بخصوص التخصص ؟ تكفون
• الانجليزيطلب نصيحة لتعلم اللغة
• ارجوا المساعدة وبسرعة

[blink]A greeting message..[/blink]

Salam Alaikom all.

At first, we all would love to thank the administration of this forum on what they do in order to help out the members by providing various services throughout this website. We won't "will not" also forget to send our regards and thankfulness to our dear member "ملبورن" as he is the one who brought out this idea. Thanks Rayan, thank you very much and I hope that we will all meet your expectations.

To my students, I am so glad to have you in my group. I am sure that you're all anxious at learning the l-anguage. Generally speaking, As English learners, we have to take into consideration the aims of learning the l-anguage in order to be so clear with what will we reach at the end--our goals of learning the l-anguage? First of all, we MUST have the desire to learn it and be so thirsty for learning anything related to it. Secondly, try to learn it because you love it, not because it's required from the place where we will apply to in the future. Finally, if we try to ignore the mentioned aims, we will absolutely punish ourselves by taking more time in learning the l-anguage than the required. I have some few steps that will help us learning the l-anguage Inshallah. Attempt to read them carefully and apply them;

1- If you are a student of English, try to be attentive in the class while your teacher explaining the lesson and once he finishes up the lesson and you still did not understand, ask him about every single bit of information that you do not know.

2- Never be shame in the class, do not say; "my colleagues will laugh at me when I ask", it is not shameful to learn, but it is when you insist on not learning because of silly reasons.

3- Do your homework and solve exercises that are required from you by yourself. Do not ask for help in solving them unless you realize that you are unable to solve them.

4- Try to participate in the class even if you think your information is wrong, because you will never learn if you do not make mistakes.

5- Open up your dictionary and listen to foreign radio stations, television channels and educational video tapes. if you face any difficulties in some words try to look them up.

6- Be careful of movies. Specially American movies, because they do not use grammar in their dialogs. Generally, Americans rarely use grammar in their daily contact. So, do not count on their speech unless you want to learn the pronounciation. However, you can still learn somethings from them such as the intonations, body l-anguage etc...

7- In order to improve your Speaking, try to read short English stories, paragraphs, essays, daily news-papers and magazines LOUDLY. Of course English ones.

8- English is so tasty l-anguage if you keep it fresh in your mind, i.e. keep all information that you learn fresh and practice them in your daily contacts.


These tips are general, all students whether in this level or not can take it. Some of you might probably know these things already, but it's just a r e f r e sh-ment. It may seem to you that this teacher is so formal. but it's actually the opposite. and within days you'll see that.

For this online-course, since there's no specific curriculm for this course, I would like to know your suggestions regarding the lessons, things that are difficult to you, for example what is the most thing that you suffer from in using the l-anguage? Maybe your English is fine, but you only have one thing that stands against your proficiency in practising the l-anguage. the more clearer you talk about yourself, the much easier I can understand your weakness points. Thus, I will be able to help you improving yourself faster.


In order to be much more aware of your exact level, I will ask all my students to write a paragraph about themselves in no less than 6 lines and no more than 8 lines. I would also ask you to indicate some certain things in your paragraph.

1- Yourself, for example: your nickname, your age, and etc.. "my name is Kareem Sablah, I am 64 years old.." (you don't have to write everything real)
2- Your best friend "my best friend is ali, he is 56 years old, I knew him in secondary school.. etc" (you don't have to write everything real)
3- your current university or school life.
4- anything else you want to talk about.
5- Please take into consideration that it's an assessment test, through which I will know your exact level in English. So, you don't need to cheat, because if you do so, you'll actually cheat yourself not me. Our prophet (peace be upon him) said: "Who cheats us, doesn't belong to us."
6- I'll be expecting your answers tomorrow Monday, 19/2/2007 before 9pm. You have more than 1 day.
7- the exam is out of 20 marks.

[blink]NOTE: [/blink]As you're in the INTERMEDIATE level, spelling and common grammar mistakes will be penalized.

At the end, remember that you're in the intermediate level, which means you're supposed to speak/write in English, and understand almost %85 of what's been written above. Of course I am not going to translate anything. If you didn't understand any word, please look it up in your dictionary. If you didn't understand any phrase or sentence, please ask me and I will try to make it easy and clear to you.

Things to be careful of:

1- Everything in this topic must be in English. If you write in Arabic, you'll be warned. for example, if you will not attend the classes of the next week, you have to write your excuse in English.
2- The meaning of "حاضر" in English is "Present". Other words correlate to the same meaning are accepted. For example, I am here, sign me present, I got it and etc..
3- Remember that all terms and conditions that were mentioned at the main topic http://www.travel4arab.com/vb/showthread.php?t=103386 are applied here.

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[blink]Please note that the paragraph you're going to write is considered the first lesson in this course, Do your best and show me your ability :101: [/blink]

Finally if you have any inquiries (questions) please ask ahead..

Waiting for your replies..:101:

AL SALM ALIKM

I'm very happy because the school is opened today, and I will try to be an active student , SO that I'm a first student want to say

I AM HERE

:106:

Our teachers
Our colleague
Asslam alikom

My nickname is afageeh . I am 30 years old . I have Baccalaureate of computer science form KSU
I hope and I try to speak English l-anguage fluently but I have some problems because when I was student
I didn't care about improved my English l-anguage . I tried before to improved my l-anguage
by take English courses and stay just one month in British but
I didn't reach to my dream. Listen and talk are weak points for me
I apologized for mistake in grammars or written , I hope to know my mistake and what is the right

Thanks for all

NOTE: As you're in the INTERMEDIATE level, spelling and common grammar mistakes will be penalized.

we are in INTERMEDIATE level or PRE-INTEMEDIATE level

Our teachers


just i want to asking you if it is admissible when we enter our replies today

I AM HERE

thank you........

Good afternoon……..

My nickname is gamar moto gahar .I am 100 years old . My best friend is Nono. She is 101 years old .She is bigger than me .I know her when we were in secondary school..

I graduated from the university before 70 years so , I have bachelor degree . By the way, I want to tell you I am very glad to study with you .Because its help me to improve my English ******** .I am sure I have a lot of mistake when I speak or write but I will do my best to be agood student….


Thank you so much……….

:106:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة afageeh


My nickname is afageeh . I am 30 years old . I have Baccalaureate of computer science form KSU
I hope and I try to speak English l-anguage fluently but I have some problems because when I was student
I didn't care about improved my English l-anguage . I tried before to improved my l-anguage
by take English courses and stay just one month in British but
I didn't reach to my dream. Listen and talk are weak points for me
I apologized for mistake in grammars or written , I hope to know my mistake and what is the right



You've done a very good paragraph. There are some mistakes, two spelling mistakes in "form KSU", it's "from KSU". and In "British", British is the name of the people who live in the UK. Thus, you had to say "In the U.K. or In Britain". There's another thing you have to know, about using the indefinite article "A, The". You should have said, "When I was a student", Mentioning the indefinite article "A".

As well, and regardless of the proper use of commas, dots and so on which appears to be completely wrong, there are many grammatical mistakes. I'll try to correct some of the serious ones, and mention their rules of the right usage.

A) WRONG: You said: "I didn't care about IMPROVED my English".

Correct: Usually when we use the preposition ABOUT there're 2 ways:
1- (about + verb + ing) -- for example; I care about playing football.

2- (about + noun ) -- for example; People care about politics/cars nowadays.

As shown above in the first case, ABOUT was followed by (verb + ing). A (verb + ing) in English is called (Gerund).
In the second case, it was followed by noun, so it's easy and clear.

The same case applies on the preposition ( BY ). It's the same as ABOUT. Therefore, you had to say: "By taking English courses".

B) WRONG: You said: "I apologized for mistake in grammars or written".

Correct: You now apologize, you should've used the present simple "I apologize" instead of the past simple. Also, the preposition FOR must be followed with Gerund verb (ING). So it becomes "For making mistakes", or the proper noun like "For the mistakes that I made". As well, you should have used "Writing" instead of "Written", because you have to use a noun in that place, and "Written" is an adjective not a noun.

C) I see that you use the same verb tense in all times. Please note that the verb changes whenever the tense needs so.

1- Improve -= Present simple.
2- Improving -= Present continues.
3- Improved -= Past simple.
4- Improvement -= The noun.

[blink]NOTE:[/blink] This clarification is to let you know the ways of using such verbs. I hope you understand what I mean. :101:


D) WRONG: You said: "Listen and talk are weak points for me"

Correct: "My Listening and Speaking skills are so weak." Wrong arrangement of this sentence.








المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة afageeh


My nickname is afageeh . I am 30 years old . I have Baccalaureate of computer science form KSU
I hope and I try to speak English l-anguage fluently but I have some problems because when I was student
I didn't care about improved my English l-anguage . I tried before to improved my l-anguage
by take English courses and stay just one month in British but
I didn't reach to my dream. Listen and talk are weak points for me
I apologized for mistake in grammars or written , I hope to know my mistakes and what is the right.



The words written in RED are wrong. With the correction I gave you, please try to correct them youself and you don't need to post them again here. just for your own good, if you want please send me a private message and I will correct it to you.


[blink]Your score is 14 out of 20

Good luck :113: [/blink]

Finally, I don't want to re-write your paragraph, because I want you to learn from your mistakes and guess what is the right thing to do in the future in order to overcome your mistakes. However, your performance in general was very good, you did well. In addition, You need to focus on the Grammar much more. I am sure that you have a good background about vocabulary, but you need to know how to use them correctly. Well done my friend and keep up the good work.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة RMQ
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...9/#post1098669

we are in INTERMEDIATE level or PRE-INTEMEDIATE level

It's a Pre-intermediate level, sorry for the mistake..

Have you started writing your paragraph?? :114:

Hurry up.. :115:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قمر موتوا قهر


Good afternoon……..

My nickname is gamar moto gahar .I am 100 years old . My best friend is Nono. She is 101 years old .She is bigger than me .I know her when we were in secondary school..

I graduated from the university before 70 years so , I have bachelor degree . By the way, I want to tell you I am very glad to study with you .Because its help me to improve my English ******** .I am sure I have a lot of mistake when I speak or write but I will do my best to be agood student





Afternoon grandmother! :109:

I can say nothing about your paragraph! Your performance is really perfect.. well done sister. As I did with afageeh, I am not going to concentrate on where you used commas and dots at the moment, maybe later Inshallah.. :101:

There are somethings in your paragraph that should be taken seriously in order to improve your level and become a very good English speaker.

A) Not good: "I graduated from the university before 70 years"

Better: "I graduated from the university 70 years ago". Here, it will look better than the previous sentence. But what UNIVERSITY? if the university is not known or not defined to us, then you should have said "from a university". It's not a serious mistake, but I want you to know how to use your sentence in the right way. Excellent! :24:

As well in "I have bachelor degree", there should be an indefinite article before Bachelor, a Bachelor.:106:

B) WRONG: "Because its help me".

Correct: I think you meant "It is help me". which is absolutely wrong. Because "IS" is a verb, and "HELP" is also a verb, how can we use two verbs with one object? it's wrong. You should've said "It helps me" the subject "IT" takes (verb + s). Clear I hope?

C) WRONG: "A lot of mistake".

Correct: the phrase (A lot of) always followed by plural verb. (A lot of + plural verb). So, it will be " A lot of mistakes "


That's all, you've done an excellent work.. wish you the best sister..

[blink]Your score is 18 out of 20.[/blink]

Good luck. :113:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة *(الريم)*
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...4/#post1098704

Our teachers


just i want to asking you if it is admissible when we enter our replies today



I just want to asking -= wrong

correct -= I just want to ask ..


and yes, haven't you started your paragraph yet!? :114: ..

what a lazy student! :109:

hurry up sister.. :101:

Good afternoon
I AM HERE

First of all iam sooooo happy because I can read and understand 85% of whate been written above

My name is aldar iam 99 years old
I graduate from my unversity for a very long time
I live in uae and iam working in alovely job and I hope to countinue with it
Ithink my weakness in English is in some of splling and grammer
But im sure that I will improve my English by training in our school with my
best teacher Kareem Sablah

My nickname is RMQ, I am 80 years old, I am live in Amman, and I am architect engineer.
I am very enthusiastic to learning English in your school; it is very interesting and wonderful idea.
But I want to tell you that, my weak points are; I can’t understand the talking when it was quickly, the grammer, and sometimes I can’t use the verbs in a correct way and can’t convert them to adjective or adverb ; but I will try to be an active student and improve my l-anguage as I can.
I hope that my paragraph is good, and if you have any note about it, please write it.Thank you…
[blink]NOTE :[/blink] I don't know why the fullstop showing at the beginning of the sentence

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الدار


First of all iam sooooo happy because I can read and understand 85% of whate been written above

My name is aldar iam 99 years old
I graduate from my unversity for a very long time
I live in uae and iam working in alovely job and I hope to countinue with it
Ithink my weakness in English is in some of splling and grammer
But im sure that I will improve my English by training in our school with my
best teacher Kareem Sablah




It's really a very good beginning.. there're some notes I should inform you of:

A) WRONG: You said: "I graduate from my unversity for a very long time".

Correct: You're talking about something that has happened in the past. So, you have to say "I graduated". Also the phrase "For a long time". isn't quite correct to be used in this sentence. The right use is to say "A very long time ago". So, the final adjustment of the sentence would be: "I've graduated from my university a long time ago".


B) WRONG: some spelling mistakes;

Correct:
1- -= (unversity) is wrong. the right spelling of it is "University".
1- -= (in uae) is wrong. It should be followed by the definite article THE, in the UAE.
2- -= (splling) is wrong. the correct thing is "Spelling".

That's all, your grammar is excellent, but you need to practice more in order to keep your level up.. well done my friend and keep it up.

Your paragraph is very short, you could've done more than that. :|

[blink]Your score is 17 out of 20. [/blink]

Good luck :113:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة RMQ
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...6/#post1099066

My nickname is RMQ, I am 80 years old, I am live in Amman, and I am architect engineer.
I am very enthusiastic to learning English in your school; it is very interesting and wonderful idea.
But I want to tell you that, my weak points are; I can’t understand the talking when it was quickly, the grammer, and sometimes I can’t use the verbs in a correct way and can’t convert them to adjective or adverb ; but I will try to be an active student and improve my l-anguage as I can.
I hope that my paragraph is good, and if you have any note about it, please write it.Thank you…
[blink]NOTE :[/blink] I don't know why the fullstop showing at the beginning of the sentence





Wow .. what do we have here.. !? something unique :113:

Using the commas/dots in their suitable place.. Great job! :x1:

just some simple mistakes..:101:

A) WRONG: You said: "I am live in Amman."

Correct: It should be "I live in Amman, or I am living in Amman" either one.. :101: (Am + verb + ing) Followed by gerund :24:

B) WRONG: You said: "I am very enthusiastic to learning English".

Correct: the preposition "TO" is always followed by infinitive verb, except in some irregular cass. However, the right way to say that is "I am very enthusiastic to learn English". :24:

C) WRONG: You said: "I can’t understand the talking when it was quickly".

Correct: It's more suitable to say "I can't understand the speech when someone talks too fast". Your level seems to be high, and you should be acquainted with such phrases.

D) WRONG: You said: "improve my l-anguage as I can."

Correct: As I can has no job right here, you should have said "As much as I can". which means you'll do your best to improve your ********. :24:

However, your paragraph is really great except some simple mistakes which will not affect your performance for sure, because I can realize that your level is really excellent and you know these mistakes already, but you want to finish quickly. So, next time I wish you will take your time and relax in order to do better work. Thanks for trying to present excellent answer. Good luck

[blink]Your score is 18 out of 20.[/blink]

Present


My name is Rima . I’m 20 years old ( the youngest betwean the grandparents :36_6_3: ) . I live in Riyadh . I’m not fluent in English but I look foreword to be a good speaker . My problem is reading, I hate to read too much ( ESPEACIALY IN ENGLISH ). My father was doing his best to improve my l-anguage but I’m stubed in learning , and the stubed still stubed ( according to my father ) . Finally, alhamdulellah he give up .
At the end I want to thank you my teacher and thank melporn about every thing you do it for the forum , God pless you .

8
8
when I wrote it in the replaying windows ,it was more then 10 lines
whats hapening here

:623:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Rima
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...6/#post1099166


Present


My name is Rima . I’m 20 years old ( the youngest betwean the grandparents :36_6_3: ) . I live in Riyadh . I’m not fluent in English but I look foreword to be a good speaker . My problem is reading, I hate to read too much ( ESPEACIALY IN ENGLISH ). My father was doing his best to improve my l-anguage but I’m stubed in learning , and the stubed still stubed ( according to my father ) . Finally, alhamdulellah he give up .
At the end I want to thank you my teacher and thank melporn about every thing you do it for the forum , God pless you .




Well done Rima. your paragraph is really wonderful. :113: Eventhough there are some mistakes, but most of them are spelling ones. I will just go over them ..

1- betwean = between
2- foreword = forward
3- espeacialy = especially
4- stubed = stubbed


Also, there're 2 grammatical mistakes;

1- -= he give up, I think you meant in the past, therefore, it'll be "He gave up".

2- -= "thank you my teacher and thank melporn about every thing you do it for the forum", the preposition to be used here is FOR, and also you repeated THANK twice which isn't preferred. As well, you shouldn't have mentioned "it" in the phrase "everything you do it" because we already have the pronoun "everything". The sentence should be: "Thanks to Melbourne and to my teacher for everything they do for the forum".

It looks better, doesn't it? :106:

[blink]Your score is 18 out of 20[/blink]

Keep up the great work, Good luck.. :113:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Rima
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...5/#post1099175

8
8
when I wrote it in the replaying windows ,it was more then 10 lines
whats hapening here

:623:

No problem at all, if you wrote more than 8 lines, I wouldn't correct it :109:

I said only 6 to 8 lines.. you don't need to add more than 1 line at most

You've done good , don't worry :113:

Good afternoon

My nickname is ALreem, I am 32 years old
I hav many friends ,but may best frind is noora
,,,I live in k s a ,it is beautiful country ,
I try to l earning English her with my best teacher
also i will try to improve my English
I promise you i will never becom a lazy student


thank you

"Hi everybody! My name is " Europe Lover

because I love Europe so much. I'm from Arabian Gulf:114: . Yesterday was my birthday. I was very happy because my friends managed to call and greeted me. But I was sad :36_1_4: because my special friend didn't show up.
I think my English is good:106: . I am also trying to learn French and Spanish ..
I love to read Love Story novels:36_3_2:

!Thank you Teacher Kareem Sablah for spending your time reading this. God bless us all
Rima, you are not the youngest here:36_1_27:

Afternoon everybody..

How is your day? I hope you're all doing great. :24:

Umm... :114:
[blink]Attention,[/blink] you still have 6 hours to have your assignment ready. I will not accept any answers after 9pm, tonight. :101:


The students who have done their homework are
1- afageeh
2- قمر موتوا قهر
3- الدار
4- RMQ
5- Rima
6- *(الريم)*
7- عاشقة اوروبا



The rest, which are 15 students haven't assigned their homework yet. Please hurry up before the specified period ends. :101:

Thank you sir, to give us this chance to learn English

My nick name is al- basil. I am living in Saudi Arabia .I am 26 years old.

Have nice times

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عاشقة اوروبا
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...0/#post1100550

"Hi everybody! My name is " Europe Lover

because I love Europe so much. I'm from Arabian Gulf:114: . Yesterday was my birthday. I was very happy because my friends managed to call and greeted me. But I was sad :36_1_4: because my special friend didn't show up.
I think my English is good:106: . I am also trying to learn French and Spanish ..
I love to read Love Story novels:36_3_2:

!Thank you Teacher Kareem Sablah for spending your time reading this. God bless us all
Rima, you are not the youngest here:36_1_27:






Hello miss Europe Lover. Happy birthday my sister..

Your paragraph is excellent. You don't have spelling mistakes nor grammatical ones, but I noticed something that nobody can perhaps write such a paragraph unless he has knowledge with where to use punctuation marks such as ( ? and , and . and ; ) which seemed to be necessary in your paragraph. Anyway, I wish if you could have your paragraph done completely right. There're some slide mistakes I want you to pay attention to..

1- Arabian gulf should be always preceded by the definite article "THE". as in the USA, the U.k., and etc.
2- Love Story, I think you mean the whole love stories. so, you should have said "Love Stories" in plural.

And finally you're welcome..

Excellent! :113:

[blink]Your score is 19 out of 20 ..[/blink]


Good luck.. :24:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الباسل2005
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...0/#post1100560

Thank you sir, to give us this chance to learn English

My nick name is al- basil. I am living in Saudi Arabia .I am 26 years old.

Have nice times





Hello al-basel, welcome to brother..

Either you didn't understand what I've asked you to do, or you are lazy to write a paragraph of 6 lines .. :114:

I will not accept your answer until you write it as required.. sorry my friend. till then, you've not done anything yet. :101:

Thank you for your note
I'm very happy , because my paragraph was good

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة RMQ
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...8/#post1100668

Thank you for your note
I'm very happy , because my paragraph was good

I am satisfied with your performance my friend. also, I am proud of this level as all members could get high scores. :24:


[blink]Waiting for the others..:114: only 3 hours left.. :101: [/blink]

[blink]Dear students ..[/blink] do you have any suggestions for our lesson tomorrow? let me know if you have any ideas?? .. :101:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كريم سبله
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...7/#post1100817

[blink]Dear students ..[/blink] do you have any suggestions for our lesson tomorrow? let me know if you have any ideas?? .. :101:




what about grammar?? :114:
cause I think we all weak in useing grammar







المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عاشقة اوروبا
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...0/#post1100550

Rima, you are not the youngest here:36_1_27:




Oh.. really ?? :
what an evil :36_1_15:
how old are you then ???


I was writing this sentence cuz all the ages in previous replaying were about ( 70 to 90 ). take a look honey
but I know that I’m not the youngest,, just kidding
:36_6_3:

Asslam alikom

I am here , and I am waiting for lesson ; sory there is no idea

good luck for all

salam alaikom
Imsoory becausemyhomewor iscoming
late,yesterday Icant do any home workbecausefamily circumstance.my nick name is almotaamelah.Imwifeandmother from toogirl.my best frendis
.monerah.she isa teacherin khobar.IIikereadingand wraiting
;Imsure my home worktocombinemany wrong word

Thank you dear brothers and sisters.. :101:







المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Rima


what about grammar??
cause I think we all weak in useing grammar




Inshallah I will try to cover some parts of grammar, but not all. Inshallah I will try to choose the best for you, and the rules of grammar that you usually need in your daily contact. don't worry sister we still have 35 lessons left. :101:










المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة afageeh


I am here , and I am waiting for lesson ; sory there is no idea



No worries, you ought to explain something that you need to learn, or your main purpose of joining this school in order to keep it in mind to discuss it later. never mind anyway.. :101:








المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة *(الريم)*


I Do Not Have Any Suggestions ,,,,
but I Wait Ing The Next Lesson ( CAN YOU SEE I AM NOT LAZY STUDENT)
I NOW THER IS MANY MISTAKES



Alright sister, don't worry about mistakes, they'll be corrected Inshallah .. :101:


Thank you all, I am really disappointed that 15 students haven't done their first homework. Inshallah they will be with us in the second lesson. :106:

Special thanks go to the students who were active and did their best and showed that they really care about what I am giving to them. Thank you :24:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة المتأملة
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...4/#post1101094

salam alaikom
Imsoory becausemyhomewor iscoming
late,yesterday Icant do any home workbecausefamily circumstance.my nick name is almotaamelah.Imwifeandmother from toogirl.my best frendis
.monerah.she isa teacherin khobar.IIikereadingand wraiting
;Imsure my home worktocombinemany wrong word



Since you're late, and to be fair with all students, I will just go over your paragraph as it's the beginning. It is really a good paragraph, but the problem is that you didn't use "space" among words, which makes it difficult to the reader to understand what you're trying to say. And there're some spelling and grammatical mistakes, you can correct them in easily Inshallah. I wish you the best with us my sister.. :101:

) thank you my teatcher.Im habby and Im doingthe ferst lesson(space)

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كريم سبله
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...0/#post1100630

Hello al-basel, welcome to brother..

Either you didn't understand what I've asked you to do, or you are lazy to write a paragraph of 6 lines .. :114:

I will not accept your answer until you write it as required.. sorry my friend. till then, you've not done anything yet. :101:



Sorry, cannot complete this course, I have too much job, thank you and I wise all the best for all

المتأملة

You're most welcome sister. I am also happy to have you in this level. I wish you'll do more work in order to improve your English. Keep making space among words sister, please! :101:



الباسل2005

Well, I am sorry to hear that dear brother. But I wish if you go to the following link:

http://www.travel4arab.com/vb/showthread.php?t=103399

And ask for quitting this course by presenting your excuse. Please :101:

[blink][ Lesson Number 2 ][/blink]

Third person singular

Salam Alaikom dear brothers and sisters.. :101:
Today, I am going to discuss the Third-Person Singular rule. I know this lesson might be silly to some of you, but I noticed that many students make mistakes in using this rule. Therefore, I decided that before we get started with the real grammar, I want to make this point clear to you all. Inshallah will be easy lesson for you..

The rule:

After I, you, we, they the verb does not get [ s ]

For example:

I play football.
You play football.
We play football.
They play football.

As you can see, the verb play didn't take an S. :101:


If we want to make it negative, we just add do not after the subject [ I, You, We, They ].

For example:

I do not play football.
You do not play football.
We do not play football.
They do not play football.


After she, he, it the verb gets an [ s ].

For example:

He plays with the kids.

She plays with the kids.

It plays with the kids.

If you want to make it negative in this case, you just add does not

after the subject [ He, She, It ]. and we remove the

[ S ] letter from the verb

For example:

He does not play with the kids.

She does not play with the kids.

It does not play with the kids.


As you can see, [DOES NOT] replaced the [ S ] in the verb.

On other words, when we used [DOES NOT], we removed the [ S ] from the verb. :101:

[blink]NOTE:[/blink] If the verb ends with letter [ Y ] we remove the letter [ Y ] and add [ ies ].

For example:

1- in the verb CRY, --==she cries

2- In the verb WORRY, He worries


[blink]NOTE:[/blink] If the verb ends with letter [ o ] we add [ es ] after the letter [ o ].

For example:

1- In the verb GO, She goes.
2- In the verb DO, She does.




Finally, The verb [HAVE]:

In the case of verb [ HAVE ] we have 2 ways:

1- After I, you, we, they we use [ HAVE ].

For example:

I have a car.

You have a car.

We have a car.

They have a car.



2- After she, he, it we use [ HAS ].

He has a pen.

She has a pen.

It has hair.


I tried to explain this lesson as much as I can, it seems a long lesson, but it is very easy. Try to read it carefully and Inshallah you'll understand it. I made everything easy with exampls. If you have any questions, please let me know.. I will be happy to answer you :101: ..

I am present

Thank you teacher

I do not have any question because it is easy for me this grammar

ok ,thank you teacher,this lesson is very easy

I am here
Thank you teacher
The lesson is easy

اخي العزيز afageeh ممنوع تكتب اقتراحك بالعربي وانت في هذا المستوى فهو ممنوع منعاً باتاً كتابة اي كلمة بالعربي بأستثناء المستوى الاول وكان من الأجدر حبيب قلبي انك تكتب اقتراحك في الموضوع المثبت المختص بالأقتراحات والشكاوي وليس داخل الدروس :101:

ولو كتبته في موضوع الأقتراحات والشكاوي فعلم انه الأستاذ القدير كريم سبله راح يكون مهتم ومطلع على كل شي يعني بالعربي راح يشوف اقتراحك وراح يأخذه بمحمل الجد لانه سبق وان قال لكم اذا في اي اقتراح فانه موجود وفي خدمتكم :101:

لذلك حبيب قلبي لقد حصلت على انذار :101:

مع خالص حبي لك :101:
اخوك الصغير \ ملبورن

I am here
Thank you
it is very easy

I am here

Thank you my dear teacher
The lesson was very great
: I was forgot this rule






If the verb ends with letter [ Y ] we remove the letter [ Y ] and add [ ies



thanks

Asslam Alikom

Dear malborn
I am sory

Dear our teacher karem

I wrot some sugestions by arabic but malborn remove it , I hope you read it before remove ; so that I will try to explain what I mean , Blease don't care about mistakes

I want withen lesson Two pragraphs one by arabic l-anguage takes some ideas and we try to translate it to english

and another one by english and we also try to translate to arabic

becuse we want to know what our mistakes when we talk some sentanses in our brain by english

I hope you know what I mean

I am here teacher

Present

Thank you teacher, You make learning easier

alsalam alikom.... welcome every body

i am here
this lesson is easy......any way


:112: i'm very sorry my teacher forget me because i didn't write a paragraph


i apologize for u

thanks teacher

To all the students who participated in the second lesson, Thank you for making me happy by passing by the lesson and siging your presence. I already knew that it's a very easy lesson, but some of you might have forgotten these rules, or probably are confused, for example, our brother الدار :106:. Thus, I wanted to start from the beginning in order that nobody comes to me later saying what does so and so mean! :101:.

For afageeh's inquiry, I am sorry I didn't read your suggestions when you wrote them in Arabic. Actually, I don't know what do you mean exactly, did you mean that I ask you to write a paragraph in Arabic and then translate it into English and vice versa? "vice versa means Write in English then Translate in Arabic, And Write in Arabic then Translate in English. On other words, the opposite".

Whatever you meant, that depends on a teaching method that is called Translation Method of teaching the l-anguage which could be a little bit confusing to you. This method is useful in certain things as it has advantages and disadantages. If you would like to do such method, please send me a private message with the idea that you want to reach, and I will be happy to assist you. Anyway, our main concern in the following lessons will be on Grammar. I hope you understand what I mean. :101:


[blink]Dear students,[/blink] if you find any word, any sentence that is not clear, please don't feel shy to ask me. PLEASE ask whatever you want to ask, I am here to help you. :101:


I am sorry to tell you that I won't be here from Thursday 22/2/2007 until maybe 25/2/2007. I will travel in an area which has no access to the internet. The lessons are prepared and will be given to you by Melbourne Inshallah. I will miss you all. :101:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة راصد المنتدى
http://www.arabtravelersforum.com/tr...4/#post1104044

alsalam alikom.... welcome every body

i am here
this lesson is easy......any way


:112: i'm very sorry my teacher forget me because i didn't write a paragraph


i apologize for u

thanks teacher

hello my friend .. I am happy that the lesson is easy to you .. no need to say sorry, it's for your own good mate, just I want you to be attentive and do your best in the future.. :101:

you're welcome

[blink][ Lesson Number 3 ][/blink]

Our lesson for today is very easy, we will be talking about grammar and the form of VERBS. Many students face difficulties in using these verb tenses, they do not know when and how to use the VERB. In order to know how to use the verb correctly, you need to know 2 things:

1- The grammatical rules for every type of verb.

2- The form of verbs; present, past, and past participle.

Today, I am going to give very simple rules which are:

A) Present Simple.
B) Present Continuous.


And the lesson after will be about the Past Simple and Past Continuous Inshallah.


Let us get started .. :101: -

===-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-==-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-


FORM Name: Simple Present

EXAMPLE: [ to run ]

I run
you run
he runs
she runs
it runs
we run
they run


It is usually used with repeated actions, take a look at the picture below:



[blink]When we use it?[/blink]

We use the Simple Present to express the idea that an action is repeated or usual. The action can be a habit, a hobby, a daily event, a scheduled event or something that often happens. It can also be something a person often forgets or usually does not do.

EXAMPLES:

I play tennis.

She does not play tennis.

The train leaves every morning at 8 am.



[line]


FORM Present Continuous:

[AM / IS / ARE] + [ VERB + ing]

EXAMPLES:

I am watchingTV.
[blink]NOTE:[/blink] When you are using a verb tense with more than one part such as Present Continuous (is learning), adverbs often come between the first part and the second part (is quickly learning).

For example:

He is quickly learning the l-anguage.


It is usually with an action that is happening right now, take a look at the picture:




When we use it?

We use the Present Continuous with Continuous Verbs to express the idea that something is happening right now, at this very moment. It can also be used to show that something is not happening now.

EXAMPLES:

You are learning English now.

You are not swimming now.

I am sitting.

I am not standing.


A very easy lesson no? :101:

[blink]Please,[/blink] I want you to know that I don't want to put much pressure on you. I know you have other responsibilities. Either you have a job, or you have a family to look after. I am going to make everything easy to be studied & revised. Please if you find this lesson too short to you, let me know so that I go deeper in the upcoming lessons. :101:

:thumb_ico Thanks *(الريم)* .. I hope so ..

Although I want every student to comment on every lesson. Even if they say it is easy or anything. Please, try to write in English as much as you can..

[blink]NOTE:[/blink] There was a mistake..

I said "I will travel in an area which has no access to the internet", while I should've said "I will travel to an area which has no access to the internet".

Sorry, I was sleepy and dizzy ... :thumb_ico

I am here

but, I don't understand exactly, Do you want to return after 25-2-2007 to complete with us??

Present



the lesson was not short , I find the length suitable for me
( I feel there is a mistake in the last sentence ) :114:


and thank you teacher for the lesson ,
we will miss you

I am here

We will miss you.

Iam here also
thank you my teacher and thanks to melbourne
and Iwish avery happy weekend to you

present

i am understand this lesson

thank you my brother for wonderful educate

see you when you coming... and.... happy weekend for all

good regards

thank you very much teacher

RMQ

Hey! :101:

I am back. :101: I meant that I will get back in 25/2/2007, but I am here now. :24:


Rima

Hello sister! :101:
It's good to know that. :101: Your sentence is not wrong, but it is better to say for example:

The lesson was long enough to me.
It wasn't that long.

It is a better way right, isn't it? :114:

:101:



قمر موتوا قهر

Hi there.. :101:
Thanks for being present.. :106:


الدار

You're most welcome my brother.. :101:

I hope you had a wonderful weekend.. :101:


راصد المنتدى

Hello bro! "brother." :101:

I am happy that the lesson was easy to you ..

[blink]BUT:[/blink]

1- you said "I am understand", which is wrong you can't use 2 verbs in one sentence. -= It should be "I understand".

2- "wonderful educate", wonderful is an adjective, and educate is a verb. You used the adjective to descibe the verb which is wrong. Adjectives always describe nouns only. -= It should be "the wonderful education".

3- "see you when you coming", -= It should be "see you when you come back".



المتأملة

You're most welcome sister. :101:




I am back now, and thanks for the student who were present. The next lesson will be tonight Inshallah. Hopefully. :101:

I am here , I am glad to come back
The lessons are good

Could you please give me all my mistakes when I wrote any sentence

In the past When I was young I was like played football , usualy I and my friend go together to stadum , But Now I can't play football becuase I have family I haven't time enough , I bought equipment I put it in home for making exercise

this just story to know my mistakes

I am so sory