المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة afageeh


My nickname is afageeh . I am 30 years old . I have Baccalaureate of computer science form KSU
I hope and I try to speak English l-anguage fluently but I have some problems because when I was student
I didn't care about improved my English l-anguage . I tried before to improved my l-anguage
by take English courses and stay just one month in British but
I didn't reach to my dream. Listen and talk are weak points for me
I apologized for mistake in grammars or written , I hope to know my mistake and what is the right



You've done a very good paragraph. There are some mistakes, two spelling mistakes in "form KSU", it's "from KSU". and In "British", British is the name of the people who live in the UK. Thus, you had to say "In the U.K. or In Britain". There's another thing you have to know, about using the indefinite article "A, The". You should have said, "When I was a student", Mentioning the indefinite article "A".

As well, and regardless of the proper use of commas, dots and so on which appears to be completely wrong, there are many grammatical mistakes. I'll try to correct some of the serious ones, and mention their rules of the right usage.

A) WRONG: You said: "I didn't care about IMPROVED my English".

Correct: Usually when we use the preposition ABOUT there're 2 ways:
1- (about + verb + ing) -- for example; I care about playing football.

2- (about + noun ) -- for example; People care about politics/cars nowadays.

As shown above in the first case, ABOUT was followed by (verb + ing). A (verb + ing) in English is called (Gerund).
In the second case, it was followed by noun, so it's easy and clear.

The same case applies on the preposition ( BY ). It's the same as ABOUT. Therefore, you had to say: "By taking English courses".

B) WRONG: You said: "I apologized for mistake in grammars or written".

Correct: You now apologize, you should've used the present simple "I apologize" instead of the past simple. Also, the preposition FOR must be followed with Gerund verb (ING). So it becomes "For making mistakes", or the proper noun like "For the mistakes that I made". As well, you should have used "Writing" instead of "Written", because you have to use a noun in that place, and "Written" is an adjective not a noun.

C) I see that you use the same verb tense in all times. Please note that the verb changes whenever the tense needs so.

1- Improve -= Present simple.
2- Improving -= Present continues.
3- Improved -= Past simple.
4- Improvement -= The noun.

[blink]NOTE:[/blink] This clarification is to let you know the ways of using such verbs. I hope you understand what I mean. :101:


D) WRONG: You said: "Listen and talk are weak points for me"

Correct: "My Listening and Speaking skills are so weak." Wrong arrangement of this sentence.








المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة afageeh


My nickname is afageeh . I am 30 years old . I have Baccalaureate of computer science form KSU
I hope and I try to speak English l-anguage fluently but I have some problems because when I was student
I didn't care about improved my English l-anguage . I tried before to improved my l-anguage
by take English courses and stay just one month in British but
I didn't reach to my dream. Listen and talk are weak points for me
I apologized for mistake in grammars or written , I hope to know my mistakes and what is the right.



The words written in RED are wrong. With the correction I gave you, please try to correct them youself and you don't need to post them again here. just for your own good, if you want please send me a private message and I will correct it to you.


[blink]Your score is 14 out of 20

Good luck :113: [/blink]

Finally, I don't want to re-write your paragraph, because I want you to learn from your mistakes and guess what is the right thing to do in the future in order to overcome your mistakes. However, your performance in general was very good, you did well. In addition, You need to focus on the Grammar much more. I am sure that you have a good background about vocabulary, but you need to know how to use them correctly. Well done my friend and keep up the good work.

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